#4 meade

In comparison to my rough draft, my final draft looks one hundred times better. My rough draft was all over the place, it was kind of a on going story of my reading and writing from 1st grade to now. The peer review helped me tremendously. having someone be completely honest and critique was very helpful in determining what you need to change.  After revising I thought that my story was the strongest part of my paper. however the conclusion was harder then i thought and it needed some work. I made major changes in my paper i probably erased about one and a half pages from my rough draft and pretty much organized my thoughts to make my narrative more clear to the reader. Next time i need to organize my paper with an outline before, so that i wont have to make so many revisions on my rough draft.